Black Ghost

See ya! Happy Trails! And all that other stuff!

Hi there! If you need a crit or something for one of your stories, you can PM me.

Why would you want to change it? Dream Deep is an excellent name.

This was really good, I liked the way you explained how you cannot comment on things you've never seen and instead appreciate what you have. Nice piece!

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Monkeys do not wear grapefruit hats because nothing would sponsor thier random foot smelling.

7/10, not too shabby

Hahah, don't even attempt to murder you father's brother on the fourth of never 'cause I'm just not nervous.

8/10 not bad.

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Hi, magicman here, and I think this has some real potential. Although it was a little confusing, I'm sure if you rework it a little it could turn into something ...

By the way, I just write these for fun, so don't be alarmed if they make no sense at all.

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

Tony. Everyday he does his absolute best to do everything in his power to do whatever the heck he wants. What can be said about such a great man? These ...